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'Till death do us part, you whispered to me
As you ripped out my heart and giggled with glee.
The innocence gone off into the mist,
Replaced forever by new sinful bliss.
Reality fades, and I sit here alone,
Small in the dark where once great I shone.
The blood leaks down from the impaling spike
As the cursed snake pulls back for the strike.
Lay dying there while eternity pass
Then the whole world shatters like a mirror of glass.
Pick up the pieces they're cutting my wrist
Throw fatal strikes and find out I missed.
Agony mixing finding new strife
killing the death that ended my life.
Blending the words they become just a murmur
and setting my problems on the back burner.
Pick up the guitar and play to the sky;
build a stairway to heaven because I can't fly.
Finding fantasia prepare to evolve
then fall to the earth like new murdered dove.
Closing my eyes I've finished the run,
so give it all up, fall down and I'm done.
So I was bored, and decided to free write, and I got this odd little thing. It actually has a nice little rhythm to it...I should turn it into a metal song for the hell of it. Anyways, I'm fully aware my writing sucks as well, but I'm submitting it anyways, because I'm tired of just looking at that godawful Typhlosion on my page.
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Plaaay's avatar
Huh, that's actually quite good. May I use this in a song?